THE BINGE DRINKING
The binge drinking is a way that teenagers enjoy themselves for a cheap price.
The binge drinking consists in : a group of young people meet in the midelle of the street to drink alcohol mixed with soft drinks.
In my opinion teenagers start to drink since they are very young, and that is bad for health.
I also think that they drink alcohol in the street for two reason:
Firstly, in many countries is ilegal o sell alcoholic dinks to peolple under eighteen years old.
Secondly, the alcoholic drinks are very expensive if you buy them in a bar.
In conclusion although I agree that binge drinking is very bad for young people I also think that autorities should organize activities for teenagers, so they can enjoy for little money and as a result they will not have to go to drinks alcohol in the street.
The binge drinking consists in : a group of young people meet in the midelle of the street to drink alcohol mixed with soft drinks.
In my opinion teenagers start to drink since they are very young, and that is bad for health.
I also think that they drink alcohol in the street for two reason:
Firstly, in many countries is ilegal o sell alcoholic dinks to peolple under eighteen years old.
Secondly, the alcoholic drinks are very expensive if you buy them in a bar.
In conclusion although I agree that binge drinking is very bad for young people I also think that autorities should organize activities for teenagers, so they can enjoy for little money and as a result they will not have to go to drinks alcohol in the street.
Helloo dear Adri...!!
ResponderEliminarI'm Paula Guirao.
Your composition is very interesting,now the young people always are drinking and this isn't good!
So I agree with you,but I think that your composiition isn't good.Only one paragraphs?Why?You should speak this with the teacher!
Byee!
Your compositon is a little jumbled and strangely structured but I liked your conclusion.
ResponderEliminarWell, the first is that the composition is structurated of a rare struscture. Also, I think that your composition is very flat, because there isn't variavility, is all very similar. At the finally, I want to say that for to enjoy and for to have a good time the people haven't to drink. There are others ways of to amuse. By Paqui
ResponderEliminarYour composition is too short,you have to organize your ideas and later you have to decorate the text, I mean, you have to do some paragraphs, to order it and the most important the text should make sense. Despite that, I agree with your opinion.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you, Adrian. I think that your composition is very short and it hasn't got a good structured but you have used some connectors and it is ok.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
why are two compositions? , the estructure are so good Adrian and I am agree with you ,but has failed something in french jaja =)
ResponderEliminarMarco Saz