Alejandro's compostion !
What is your opinion about eco-friendly products? Do you think they are an urgent need or just a passing fashion?
Now eco-friendly is more used everybody to try to pollute less and not contribute more any type of contamination.
Arguments in favor of eco-friendly are that haven't pesticide and also reduces pollution of ground water and floors. Another argument in favor may be that they are very healthy and nutritious.
Arguments against eco-friendly is that with the view doesn't look good and also kept unless the industrial products. Another argument against may be that these products are more expensive than industrial products.
In conclusion, eco-friendly is better than industrial products. I think that should be more eco-friendly that industrial products.
Ineed they are necessary cause they are a good way to replace other products which are bad for the enviroment or which are limitated.
ResponderEliminarNowadays eco friendly products have been increasing their number because people is getting consciuos about the problem it suposes
I believe that you should have done a opinion essay with this topic because the topic is: "What is your OPINION about eco-friendly products? Do YOU THINK they are an urgent need or just a passing fashion?". I think that you should have used other connectors to introduce your ideas: On the one hand...,on the other hand...,one advantage is that... and your conclusion could be better.
ResponderEliminarYour wording does not comply with the structure of a text of opinion. Your text has a structure of debate. But your content is accurate and I share your opinion.
ResponderEliminarCarolina Sanchez Bullejos.
I agree with Lorena: you have done a debate and you should have done a opinon essay. In addition, I don't understand the first line. I believe that you could have done it longer but I agree with you.
ResponderEliminarVirgina Belmonte.
I think the text was about "What is your opinion about eco-friendly products? And Alexx.. I don't find your opinion to any paragraph.
ResponderEliminarAlso is short, and when you say eco-friendly, you have products eco-friendly.
Rafa Bernabe
I am Paula guirao!
ResponderEliminarYour composition is better....but I think that you have used the translation
In this composition you should given your opinion,introduce the topic and then you had to give some arguments to defend your opinion with some examples and finally you have to coment again your opinion. The body has the same structure,so it's a bit repetitive, for this reason you must to use another words or sentences although you say the same. I don't know if you understand that I want to mean. And that's all.
ResponderEliminarI think that he have done a wrong structure because it ask you to say your opinion not to do a debate composition, also Alejandro have not write enough, so this composition is completly bad. In Addition he have be wrong writting 'favor' because is 'Favour'.
ResponderEliminarAngel Valero
Well, the first is that you would have to write a opinion essay. I have founded mistkaes as: "to try to pollute"->"in order to try to pollute"; "... eco-friendly are that haven't pesticide"-> "are that it hasn't pesticide"; " they are very healthy and nutritious"->" it is very healthy..." (you had written in singular before); " I think that should be more eco-friendly that industrial products" ->"I think that we should buy more eco-friendly productos than industrial products. Also, the composition is short and limited.
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