How has the financial crisis affected daily life in Spain ?(María)
Nowadays, Spain is suffering from the famous
financial crisis since 2006 approximately.
It has brought many bad consecuences to our daily life
and , above all, to people who used to work at building.We are going to see how
our habits have changed before and after the crisis.
Firstly,as this text says, people used to buy more
national brand products than today.Now, people don’t care about if the store
brand products ‘ quality is a little bit worse because they have realised that
this little difference of price is more useful to spend in other important
things.
In addition, we can say that financial crisis has also
affected our free time. A few years ago, more people used to go to gym but now,
if they want to be fit , they prefer doing some jogging for free. Moreover,
before the crisis,more young people used to eat out and go out to discos every
week-ends,however,now they consider more profitable staying in town with friends
and dining something made by themselves.
To sum up, I think that this is a miserable and
terrible economical situation and I strongly hope that it doesn’t affect more
to us and it is getting better soon.
i am a first person to coment the composition maria . it is a good composition i also prefer jogging ral
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ResponderEliminarraul
so good composition Marie! you are awossome !
ResponderEliminarMarco Saz Garcia
Your writing is well structured and well written grammatically. The content is correct and I hope the crisis will soon pass :) Carolina.
ResponderEliminarThis composition is very good written and I don't found mistakes. I agree with Maria, people avoid spending too much money and avoid the whims. I also hope (like the rest of Spain) that this situation can be resolved soon.
ResponderEliminarThe Maria's composition is very very good, I don't find any mistakes and I totaly agree with your opinion, and I too hope that this situation end quickly.
ResponderEliminarMaria it´s perfect. I like very much the composicion.
ResponderEliminarThis composition is so good and of course I completely agree with you. We do that you have said about dining together without go out and it's funny too. It's a difficult period to everybody.
ResponderEliminarI've only found two mistakes: prefer* doing--> it's prefer TO do.. and the next one I'm not sure at all but when you say: young more people..I understand that as younger people I don't know.
María, your composition is perfect and in addition, I haven't found any mistake.
ResponderEliminarI have to say that I agree with you and I hope ,how all, that this situation changes soon.
Virginia Belmonte.
This composition in my opinion is perfect!
ResponderEliminarI agree with you and I hope that this situation change.
Good job..!!
Paula Guirao
very well it is interesing!!
ResponderEliminarI agree with you Maria. Nowadays young people spend their money in differents things. However, some extra services likes gyms, or discos have reduced their prices in order to that people go there. At this time, I haven't seen any mistakes (maybe because iit's late jijij I don't know)
ResponderEliminarPD: Put your name on the title please
Perfect! Very well work!! I haven't found any mastakes. So, I agee with you, now a day, people don't spend almost money and they don't go out as before. The situation is terrible althouh I hope that it improve.
ResponderEliminarI also agree with Maria.
ResponderEliminarThe structure is son good and the conectors isn't repeat.
To my mind is very interesting.¡
Rafa Bernabe
That composition is really good, as in comprehension as in contents. I totally agree with what you have said, and I also think that the level of live we were having was unnatural as the one we're having now. And gramaticaly I just have to say that you have make a mistake on that "young more people used to eat...-" I think is *"young people used to eat more..." The rest is correct.
ResponderEliminarAsensio
Well.. I realised that I wrote this sentence in a bad order ''young more people'' I meant to say "young people used to eat more..." as asensio says :)
ResponderEliminarlove you all XXX
-…don'care about WHETHER the store… (cuando hay dos alternativas, se suele poner WHETHER en lugar de IF "no les importa si la calidad de los productos es peor -o mejor- ).
ResponderEliminar-as Merche says: PREFER TO DO
-go out to discos EVERY WEEKEND
-more profitable to STAY AT HOME
-hope that it doesn't AFFECT US LONGER AND GETS BETTER SOON.
I agree with maria. I think Maria has all reason and the text is well argued and a good structure
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