Nowadays people is more worried about his health and body. Normally people go to the gim but there's some people who prefer to follow another trend: Organic food. Organic food is not something new, the first humans used to eat organic food. But with the development of the machines and the Insdutrial Revolution we wanted to make our food quickly. And as all, some people disagree with this.
People who agree say that organic food is not just a kind of food is a way of life, because you are not running everywhere you just sit down and wait that your meal is ready.
But on the other hand, there is people who says that we can't stop development with things like that and we just have to try to use less inseccticides and you will have the same effects to the health.
So debate is not clear we will see what happen, but I think that we all will have to think to relax a bit.
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I think that the composition of Asen is very good, but he writes in a different way from that of the book. He uses others structures... I think that the debate is clear and we have to eat preferably organic food, because it hasn't chemical additives and is more healthy.
ResponderEliminarI believe that this composition is good and in addition, I haven't found any mistake.
ResponderEliminarI think that you should have done longer conclusion and I also believe that you should have done more arguments in favor and arguments against.
Virginia Belmonte.
I agree with Paqui, Asensio write his composition in a different way but it's good written. I found only a mistake : (l.7) there is >there are.
ResponderEliminarthe text of my friend asensio precido me time wise but a short and bitter, well ... you'll pass or not improve asensio
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