Organic food is a kind of feed that protects to the planet's life and also protects to consumer's health. Everybody doesn't know any information about this,but is organic food a good daily diet? What are the differences between this kind of food and normal food?
An advantage of eating organic food is that it is cultivated of natural form, it is more nutritious, it improves the fertility between couples because of pesticides, it also improves the immunological system and it has known effects. Wthat's more, another advantage could be that it is beneficial to the environment.
On the other hand, as long as there are some advantages ,there are some disadvantages too. Organic food is more expensive that the normal food. There wouldn't this food to everybody, it would be difficult.The process of his obtaining is slower,for this reason it needs more work.
Finally, I think that there ins't any proof of beneifts for the health if you eat organic food.
I think that the composition is quite good, but Merche should explain better the advantages because people doesn't anything about it. Also, I think that it's a unuseful form of care the envoriment
ResponderEliminarAngel Valero
I agree with you Angel.
ResponderEliminarThe structure is very good and this topic is very interesting
Paula Guirao
this topic is my favorite because maybe I will study the envoriment y don't know now. I like this composition.
ResponderEliminarMarco Saz Garcia
I think there's a mistake where you put "An advantage of eating organic food..." because after that you talk about other advantages so I would have put "Some advanateges..."
ResponderEliminarAccording to the structure, I think it's quite good And it have sense.
The conclusion might be longer
The structure is well, First advantages and after disadvantages.
ResponderEliminarI think that her opinion could be langer,
also I agree with Marco,is very interesting.
Rafa Bernabe¡
the wording is a well organized structure with the introduction followed by the benefits and ending with the conclusion incoveninetes ruben
ResponderEliminarwas surprised when she said that the
ResponderEliminarfood is organic fertilizer among
couples but I do not like to be more
expensive than normal
raul ferrer
I agree with you, Merche !
ResponderEliminarI think that you have done a good structure but I believe that you should have done longer the conclusion. I haven't found any mistake.
Virginia Belmonte.
This topic is very interesting and personally I think that organic food is perfect to eat everyday because of the improvement of immunological system and pesticides but the only problem is that it is more expensive than normal food.However, as far as I'm concerned I believe that it worths and to correct Merche I'd like to say that there're evidences to prove that organic food is better to our health than normal food.
ResponderEliminarI think that Merche´s composition is very good
ResponderEliminarFirstly, she has followed a structure : introducction
advantages and disatvantages
conclution with her opinion
So, I thinh taht this topic is very good explained by Merche
By; Adrian Plaza!! :)
In my opinion, the composition is good and I think that if i can choose, i would choose organic food because is a very good option. By : Paqui
ResponderEliminarMerche's composition is good structured with four paragraphs where we can see a introduction, advantages, disadvantages and conclusion. Merche composition's has also many connectors
ResponderEliminarALEAJDNRO SANCHEZ GRACIA
I found some mistakes maybe for writing quickly: "What's more"(l.6),isn't and benefits (in the last line)but the composition is very good structured and written and Merche has used connectors and vocabulary.
ResponderEliminarMerche's composition is good structured with four paragraphs where we can see a introduction.In my opinion, the composition is good .This topic is very interesting and personally I think that organic food is perfect to eat everyday I like this topic ! . Some mistakes : 1- Everybody DON'T know. 2- párrafo dos tercera linea WHAT'S. 3- párrafo tres segunda linea THAN the normal food.
ResponderEliminarEMILIO
this is very interesting , I don't konw nothing about this.
ResponderEliminarI agree with Emilio and Lorena about the mistakes you should do a introduction.
Marco Saz
I don't understand very well the topic but it seems interesting , I have never listened anthing about this; you should explain better the topic. In addition, there are some mistakes, for example you reversed some letters. Although it is well.
ResponderEliminarAlejandra Ávila
incridible merche! congratulations perfect!
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