A happy time that I wanted to finish.
The last year, the high school organized a trip to London. I was very excited with this because I love travelling and it was the first time that I traveled to a place outside of Spain. My friend Paqui and other students of my class came with me so this seemed a good travelling.
The first time that I saw London, I was amazed. London was the most beautiful city that I had ever seen. I saw many places in London and everything was beautiful. Especially, I loved the Big Ben. I felt like in a movie. In despite the fact that I was having fun, I missed many things. I missed my family, my friend Virginia, my bed and the spanish food because in London I ate fast food all the time and I hate the fast food, especially when I 'm eating fast food at the morning, afternoon and night. I have never felt so unconfortable.
Finally, when I arrived to Spain I was very happy. Of course I will go to London in a future but I will go with my family or my best friends and the travelling will be much better.
I like your composition, it is very good structurate and it is interesting experience. Good!
ResponderEliminarI think that your compostion is very good. You have used connectors and the grammar is ok. The history is really and furthermore I like. The narration is very good.
ResponderEliminarBy: Paqui.
VERY GOOD, the composition of La Loré¡ is very good estructurate and she has writen a experience that she has had
ResponderEliminarADRIAN PLAZA ;D
It will be interesting to begin sayind that I went to that trip too.
ResponderEliminarYes, it was fantastic. I agree with you because London has many wonderful buildings and you feel like you were in a movie or you were a celebrity walking by these wide streets.
But I disagree with your opinion about the food. From my point of view, it was just perfect. Yes, we had lunch almost always on Burger king or something like that but we had dinner or breakfast with chinese food , italian food , hot dogs , kebab ... and other many things. I think that there were a variety incredible of food and I was absolutely delighted with with that. :)
Lorena,your composition is very interesting. You have done a good job because you have done an introduction, a body and a conclusion and you have used many vocabulary.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte
I like so much your composition. I remember this trip beacause I had liked to go too but I thought I'd go in summer and finally I didn't go to London. For this reason I felt very sad. I think it is a good experience of your life that you won't forget, even if it was the first time that you went out of Spain.
ResponderEliminarI am sorry, I am colorblind and I can't read good this composition
ResponderEliminarMarco
hello! I think you've done a wonderful text because it fulfills all the steps to be correct and I also like a fun text.
ResponderEliminarCarolina Sanchez Bullejos
I like your composition.It will be interesting to begin sayind that I went to that trip too.
ResponderEliminarYes, it was fantastic. I agree with you because London has many wonderful buildings and you feel like you were in a movie or you were a celebrity walking by these wide streets. EMILIO
Your compositio I think it's not bad at all, and I think you have worked so hard to do this. But, i agree with Maria, and I think that food in London it's not bad
ResponderEliminarAngel
i like your composition, the composition has good structure and i also love to travel and the Arsenal...
ResponderEliminarJESUS VERA
I like your composition and it's well structurated but I don't share your opinion about the London food because I was there too with you and I ate very good and the rest of the people too so, really where you there?
ResponderEliminarAsensio Argiler Grau
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ResponderEliminarEveryone don't have the same tastes and I don't liked very much the food. Maybe I don't visited the suitable restaurants, I don't know. Just is my opinion. It's a beautiful city, about that we agree.
ResponderEliminarYou're right, Lorena. Britain is not famous for its fine cuisine. I didn't like the food either when I lived there.
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