A Saturday night, the class of second of bachillerato met for dinner and later they went of party.(Claudia Alc) They wanted to go to a disco called Mogambo. The weather was stormy so they decided to rent a bus. When the bus arrived, they got into the bus. (Mario) In a few minutes they all were outside Mogambo laughing, making jokes and all the things the use to do.But, suddenly the weather started to get worst and the conductor returned to Bigastro without tell anyone he goes ,leaving them alone(Asensio).They kept laughing, dancing, singing ... until it was too late and saw that there wasn,t any father then began to call her parents but they were not picked up the phone ...(Román) They phoned a taxi but roads were cut by rain and it couldn´t pick up them. They were scared and they didn't know what to do (Virginia). Then, they started to look for a refuge because the weather was worse each moments and the sun wasn't up. At the back of the disco there was a wood and they decided to go into. (Alejandra) Finally, a father answered the phone but there was a problem; he couldn't come because his car was broken. Every time they were more worried: it was cold,the people were going away, it was raining more... (Merche)
We were scared in the Wood and it already dark , when suddenly we listen to move a shrubs . A dog appeared doing woof! He was a big and black dog .He looked a aggressive dog. (Paqui)The dog went to where we were with the eyes of a murderer, but the owner appeared and grabbed him, time to calm down and seeing that good time we decided to go Mojacar (Ruben).In Mojacar we finally find a pub where we were in a good way around the world. The place was called Mandala. It was a place with many lights enirme and music many high the walls were red but no one expected it.(Raúl)But no one expected that the pub would be closed by heavy rain. The rain was spoiling the night and our party, so we decided to find a hotel to spend the night.(Lorena) We got all the hotel and we drink alcohol. We were all very drunk and we did not stop to laugh very much about the state of some students.But the good time finished because the light went off and we heard stranges noises.All heard that noise and all drunk went to investigate.(Andrea) Not they all went to investigate. Some of them stayed in the room and others went to bed. Those who had drunk were those who mas scared were. (Miriam)But they were the most brave ones and they find out that the noises were shouts which came from the hall.They went to the hall and they saw a big bus whose driver was Jose Ramon and he said : C'mon , quickly ! let's up to the bus and come back to Bigastro! Finally , they returned to Bigastro but the ones who were asleeped rested in Mojacar.(María)
Finally, let jose ramon Bigastro half and returned to by resting on mojacar but ran out of gas. (Marco) Then Jose Ramon saw other bus in a station and he ran by the carrer and he get but needed help with other boy. (Adrián) Few Minutes Before maria the incident was drinking and got lost in the city and did not know how to return to West mojacar. (joaquin) Rubira then mobile phone call to Maria to give him some clue to where he was and told him he was near a casino. (Alejandro) Rubira later came to the casino and started playing poker and won 30,000 pounds and took the briefcase full of money and left the casino. (Jose Ramon Rubira) Rubira asked the boy if he knew that casino bus and the boy said he knew where he was and would spend 30m to get there (Emilio) Rubira then bought a bus with the money to find Maria, though he was drunk. (Jesus) Jose Ramon went to the hotel to pick up his friends, and then, they went to pick up Maria too, but they crash to another car, and 5 of they died. So Survivors went to Bigastro to break the new to the other people. (Angel) Two days later Bigastro Telecinco goes to them and they did an interview for the adventure they had lived. (Carol)
It sounds interesting!
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