Why do so many people gather in public places to drink together? Do you think that the ''botellón'' is a good way of socialising?
Nowadays, many young people spend a lot of time drinking in public places with their friends. In my opinion, they do it because it is a fad.
In the past,people didn't have this habit. It is a fact that many older people don't understand the reason of going to drink on the roads, it's reasonable.
To my mind, they gather in public places to drink together because the ''botellón'' seems to them a way of distraction and above all of entertainment. In addition, each day this situation is very common between teenagers but I'm sure this will be temporary.
However, I believe that the 'botellón' is a good way socialising,for example when you go to ask for a glass, for some ice cubes you can begin to speak with that person little by little until they become friends. Normally, in a ''botellón'' there are several people of different types and that is fantastic because you can make friends with somebody who has the same appearance that your.
Finally, it seems to me that alcohol is such an essential ingredient in Spanish people's lives. When there are local festivities or they go to another party the first thing thought is the ''botellón''.
-a good way socialising (preposition needed)
ResponderEliminar-until they become friends (different pronoun needed)
-the same appearance that your ("same" needs a different conjunction, and "your"cannot be possessive).
-the first thing thought (different wording needed)
Well, Merche, you've done a great job!
By the way, if somebody is interested in the difference between "socialize" and "socialise" (spelling differences between American and British English), here you have an interesting link
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/American_and_British_English_spelling_differences#-ise.2C_-ize_.28-isation.2C_-ization.29
I agree with the opinion. And I think that the composition is good.
ResponderEliminari think that this composition is good . this topic is interesting because the teenagers have created a fashion of botellon ! , Its a unusual fashion jaja , to sump up I agree with merche ! i dont found any mistakes ! EMILIO
ResponderEliminarSpain likes so much "botellón" and parties. It is famous for this. It is true that nowday teenagers and yough people always think in parties with botellon. Maybe, it is a good sicialize way althouh it is very unhealthy.For example, what are we thinking now about our gradiation on friday? In alcohol and party!
ResponderEliminarI agree with you, Merche ! I think that your composition is very well and you have done a correct structure ! I haven't found any mistakes and I don't know correct the mistakes that Trini has said.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.