What is your opinion about eco-friendly products? Do you think they are an urgent need or just a passing fashion?
There are many reasons for use the eco-friendly products, one of them is that the organic products are healthier because they are free of toxic persistent, many of them used in conventional farming to kill insects.
Another reason is because are environmentally, when we consume eco-friendly products collaborate in the conservation of the environment and avoid pollution of land, water and air.
Moreover we need to use eco-friendly products always by our health.
To conclude , I must to say that I am in a favor with the eco-friendly products , they are healthy and do not harm the environment. I believe that is a small effort that all could do.
I totally agree with the arguments you expose in favour to eco-products, and are completly true because at home we use to eat ecologic products, and in the moment I eat bad food I feel worth. Gramatically I can see some little problems with conectors as "I must TO(no) say", and when you say "Another reason is because are environmentally" here we need to say good or bad. But in general is a good composition. Good job!
ResponderEliminarAsensio
Marco, I think that the composition in the blog this week was only assigned to Carol and Adrian , wasn't it?
ResponderEliminarI agree with maria, and I think that this topic already was worked.
ResponderEliminarI don't know girls Asen and Joaquin told me that this is my topic..., I don'r konw
ResponderEliminarMarco
I don't know what happen but I did my composition about this topic...anyway tomorrow we will ask to Trini to make sure.
ResponderEliminarMarco, your composition is well structured, using various connectors and much vocabulary. But can´t put your opinion before the conclusion.
ResponderEliminarJESUS VERA
Your composition is very well but I agree with all them, this topic isn't.
ResponderEliminarI think that you have done a well structure and in addition, you have used connectors. I haven't found any mistakes. Good job !
EliminarVirginia Belmonte.
I seems me interesting the composition, because we have eco-friendly products, but we does not eat.
ResponderEliminarAnd We know that it is so good to it don't pollute being very good to our health.
Rafa Bernabe.
have done well estracturada good writing. I've worked and you did it right
ResponderEliminarWell , this composition good estructured , it have some conectors , This compostion is interesting . I haven´t found any mistakes ! EMILIO
ResponderEliminarI've only seen this mistake: I must TO say > I must say or you can say I have to say but your composition it's very good and I agree with your opinion.
ResponderEliminarthe Marco's composition this very well structured since it has exposed the topic clearly and the profit
ResponderEliminarof using the eco-friendly products. For my part I think that the products it is an advance that is growing and the moment was coming that we all use these products.