In this moment ,Spain is on recession,and the principal problem is that there isn't job. A solution would be to go abroad,but...is it worth it?
On the one hand, it is a good idea because if you want that your family can live good, it is necessary.If you don't have job,you can not pay
the house,for example, or the electricity and all this is indispensable.Also,you can meet a interesting people and to see new thing.
But,on the other hand, in order to everybody is very hard and difficult to be in other country with other language and without to see your family.
In conclusion,in my opinion ,it is a good idea and solution,becuase the most important is that your family can live good.
this is the paula composition no¿
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Marco Saz Garcia
Hi Paula!I agree with you and I also think that going abroad to work is a goob solution. Apart from that, I've found some mistakes like:
ResponderEliminar- there isn't job --> There's no job
- and to see new thing --> and seeing new things
- in order to everybody --> to everybody
- without to see your family --> without seeing your family
kisses! :)
Paula, your composition is good structured but you should have done it longer. I don't understand the third paragraph and when you do the first conditional, the verb that goes with "if" must be in present (how you have done it) but second verb must be in FUTURE.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
This composition is good but if it had a longer introduction it would be better.
ResponderEliminarI've found other mistake:when she says: to see new thing-->things* and these that my classmate,Maria, has put.
In my opinion, it's a bit repetitive but as I've said on Lorena's composition, I like this topic.
I like your composition and I agree with the mistakes that my classmates have said. I agree with your opinion too and I think that if someone haven't work and have a difficult economic situation, work abroad could be a good option.
ResponderEliminarI desagree with you because in my opinion Spain have the resources necessarys how for go on here and you can finish your career and you can learn many in the foreign but your home is your home and Spain i don´t changes for nothing
ResponderEliminarI have liked much this composition. I believe that it is necessary to do any thing for the family, though it is hard.
ResponderEliminarI think that the third paragraph would be better if she would say ''Is so difficult to stay in other country where you have to speak other language and where you aren't able to see your family'' instead of ''is very hard and difficult to be in other country with other language and without to see your family.''
ResponderEliminarAll in all, congratulations Paula, well done!
Angel
"In conclusion,in my opinion " It has no sense, it would be better if you put I think or I believe instead of in my opinion.
ResponderEliminarAnother mistake is "becuase the most important is that your family can live good"
*because the most important is that your family could live well*
These are the mistakes I have found. You have already commented on some of them. Good job!
ResponderEliminar-If you want that your family can live WELL.
-you can meet a interesting people and to see new thingS.
-IT is very hard and difficult FOR EVERYBODY to be in ANother country with ANother language and without to seeING your family. (Ángel's wording sounds better, though)
Había tachado las palabras incorrectas en el documento word, pero no han salido tachadas aquí, así que lo escribo de nuevo.
Eliminar-you can meet (no A) interesting people and (no TO) see new thingS.
I've seen your classmates including mine. work has generally been pretty good. I'm impressed!
ResponderEliminarI've seen better work from your peers including mine. work has generally been pretty good. I'm impressed!
ResponderEliminari think that is a good composition . we must help to families
ResponderEliminarraul
Your composition is good structurated and it is good. I agree with you opinion, and I think that if I would be in these situation, I would go to others countries.
ResponderEliminarI like your composition! it is good. In addition, I totally agree with you, in this moment it is better to go to other countries although you should go alone. To m mind, I would like to go to other countries because I would like travel.
ResponderEliminarThat's a good composition. I like the way you explain because is clear and quick, and is easier for us while reading. I can feel just one mistake, On the one hand, I think that's not a with the if not on one hand.
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