Is it nice that they do the processions of Easter in public, there being people not believer?
Many people say that Easter processions have to do. However, there are against arguments. In the following paragraphs we will discuss this topic.
In the one hand, there are people think that Easter processions are very important because they believe in God and the Easter celebrate the passion, the death and the resurrection of Jesus. They take out holies by the streets in processions. This people are catholics.
On the other hand, other people, the atheists don’t believe in a God and they disagree with the catholics. The most of they do demonstrations in order to stop with the religious processions . In the last Maundy Thursday, a lot of people went to the protest in order to claim theirs rights of atheists people. They want to finish with the religious expressions.
In conclusion, I think that the agree ideas over come the disagree iseas. I believe that we have to respect all the ideologies, being these the ours or not.
BY: PAQUI CALVO RODRÍGUEZ
The composition is well structured but there's is a problem she has said Easter despite Holy Week, because the easter is the period and holy week is the week of the passion of Jesus, that's my opinion. And about the contents I agree with Paqui and I think as a cultural event has to be kept.
ResponderEliminarAsensio
Your composition is very good written and well structured but maybe I would have done a longer introduction. I agree with your conclusion and I like Holy Week but I understand that people who don't believe they disagree with the religious processions.
ResponderEliminarThe composition is well structured,
ResponderEliminarIn my humble opinion I agree that everyone should respect the ideologies of other people.
Despite of it's good you've searched and compressed information about subject.
I don't understand the first sentence of last paragraph ... If someone could translate it I would appreciate.
Rafa Bernabe. ¡ ¡
Que las ideas a favor o las ventajas superan a las ideas en contra de las procesiones ^^
ResponderEliminarpaqui, I think you have treated the subject is boring, very boring, but well done you've focused a good structure and repeating a word, congratulations
ResponderEliminarThe text this a structured well and very clear I think that it is that repetar both opinions so much believer and atheistic and to respect them and also I am to favor since I believe that it is something very important in the customs of our country.
ResponderEliminarYour composition is very good written and well structured but as Lore said your introduction is very short but the remainder is very goog also the vocabulary in this text is easy to read and very well written.
ResponderEliminarBy; Adrian Plaza Martinez ;D!
It seems to me fantastic what Paqui has said. We must respect the opinions of the others be to favour or in against. I believe that she has the whole reason. I think the same thing that I put in Rafa's composition.
ResponderEliminarThanks Paqui ¡
ResponderEliminarRafa Bernabe.
Paqui, your composition is very well structured with four paragraphs which explain the subject very well. On the other hand, have put many connectors and there is plenty of vocabulary
ResponderEliminarALEJANDRO SANCHEZ GRACIA
I'll start by saying that this topic isn't interesting, but the composition in general is so good.
ResponderEliminarI only can say here that it seems to me that it's a cultural event and I know people who don't believe in God and they go to the Easter processions,for Heaven's sake!I don't understand that but each other..
Paqui, your composition is well and I haven't found any mistake. You have done a good structure but I don't understand the first question.
ResponderEliminarI want to say that I agree with Merche: Many people ,who aren't believer, go to the procession and I also agree with Paqui : "we have to respect all the ideologies."
Virginia Belmonte.
your composition is ver well estructurate, ou have a clear order in our argumnts, homever it has been a little bit difficult to understand some parts of our text and i have founs some mistakes like " On the other hand" " for them". Well work, Paqui.
ResponderEliminarpaqui your composition is well structured and use good vocabulary, but I don´t understand your conclusion, ¿that of ISEAS?
ResponderEliminarJESUS VERA
Imanol, are you like Risto ?
ResponderEliminarNow, focusing on the composition, it's me or the title haven't got much sense ?
I agree with you cause people could be believer or not, but the holy week it's a tradition, and it shows you the culture, what is good.
PD: It's the third time I wrote this comment !!!! jajaja
I agree to show up while I finish with the freedom of other person
ResponderEliminarraul
this composition is great , thanks paqui , I learn so much with you.
ResponderEliminarMarco Saz Garcia
Very good Paqui..!
ResponderEliminarYour composition is good struturated!
I think that this is a cultural event and if you don't believe, you don't see it.