Are necessary homework?
Many people think that homework is necessary and other think that it isn't. However, it has got advantages and disadvantages. We must look at both sides of the question.
On the one hand, there are parents who believe that the children must make homework in class because at home, homeworks are similar and if the children don't understand in class , they won't understand at home because teachers aren't there. In addition, it is discriminator because many children need help and some of theirs can't have it. For this cause, the parents take up the responsability, this is too much for them.
On the other hand, other think that it is absolutely necessary because the children should practise it. Sometimes, the children think that have understood the lessons in class but when they try to do it, they realize that they haven't understood it.
In my opinion, homeworks are necessarcy but the difference is loads of them. Children's responsibilities are their homeworks and they should listen in class, ask if they have understood it and after that, they should try make it at home.
I agree with Alejandra, children must listen in class and they do their homework!!
ResponderEliminarIn adicction, the estructure in Alejandra´s compisition is very good
by: Adrian Plaza ;D
Remember, HOMEWORK is always singular.
ResponderEliminarMANDAR DEBERES: To give homework-to assign homework. Example: Are you going to give us homework? (¿nos vas a mandar deberes?)
I think that the Alejandra's composition is good, and I disagree with she , because I believe that homework isn't neccesary for us.
ResponderEliminarYour composition is very good written (I didn't found mistakes) and structured but maybe you could have done a longer introduction. I totally agree with your opinion, the homework is a good way for learning.
ResponderEliminarI'll start by saying that the introduction doesn't provide many information. I have found some mistakes such as: when you say 'make homework' is do homework; (line 5) when you say the children* isn't necessary the* because you are talking in general; (line 8) when you also say some of theirs* the correct would be-> some of them and finally in line 10 I think you wanted to writer others instead of other*.
ResponderEliminarDespite these mistakes I also have to say that I absolutely agree with your opinion, homework is part of education.
I agree with Alejandra, homework is part of the learning developpement and above all , children need to do it because their are practising on that way.Moreover, it is good for them, they start to get use to it because in the future their work will be harder. Doing homework they can realize if they have understood well the lesson , and if they haven't , they will be able to ask their taecher next day and improve themselves.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you, Alejandra ! Your composition is very good: you have done a good structure and I haven't found any mistake. I think that you should have done longer introduction, for example with a question.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
I have liked very much Alejandra's redaction. She has reason , the homework are necessary.
ResponderEliminarIt is a way of knowing if the lesson has been understood and one form of studying.
I agree with you, Alejandra. The homeworks are very important to learn and also to know to do the problems and others things. Your composition is very good strucutred with introdution, things agree and things disagree and conclusion.
ResponderEliminarALEJANDRO SANCHEZ GRACIA
I agree with you, Alejandra how also with Alejandro Sanchez I think that The homeworks are very important to learn and also to know to do the problems and others things.Your composition is very good written and structured but maybe you could have done a longer introduction how say also Lorena !
ResponderEliminarI haven't found any mistake too .. Well this composition have a good topic ! EMILIO
As I said in the other composition, homework are useless. You can learn without doing them, paying atention in class for example. And what to say about the structure ? It's late and I want to go to sleep
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duties are necessary they are a small way to study Terner raul
ResponderEliminarthe title " is necessary homework?" jeje! but is so good the composition!.
ResponderEliminarMarco Saz Garcia