People undestand vegetarianism as a protest against people who eat animals, but vegetarianism is more things, is a life style. The people who practise this life style don't eat anything which come of animals, like milk or fat, and also they protect envoriment too.Although vegetarianism is not a religion, they can be part of Budism or hinduism.
A study of an American University says that people who don't eat animals have a lot of health problems, because they don't have enough proteins, vitamins A and B , and iron. It's is the biggest problem of vegetarianism
So, Knowing it, I think that if you are capable to follow all their aspects and you love the nature, you must be vegetarianistic. All in all, I can't and I thinck I can't protect envoriment and lots of animal without be vegetarianism, doing other things like being part of an ONG.
Also, I think that the best option is that people eat less meat and more vegetables but they must eat all kinds of food
I think that we need eat all , meat, vegetals, fruit , fish..., I respect the people who don't eat meat but I like it the meat so for me was imposible don't eat meat.
ResponderEliminarMarco
Your wording is well made but I think the vegetarian does not feel like you've identified defined but other things such as their health as worse is true. CAROLINA
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ResponderEliminarI am Paula
Who has done this composition??
Well, I love this topic because when I will be vegetarian in the future.
Now I can't by my father!
And I think that the structured is very good!
I like this topic, I respect people who are vegetarians but I think that in this life is necessary to eat all of kinds of fodd as Angel has said in his composition because for this reason we'll be well for a long time.
ResponderEliminarSo, I agree with my classmate. It's up to yourself.
In my opinion, I have nothing against this style of life, in fact, I like the vegetable. It is true that I have to say that I prefer a balanced diet in which there is meat, fish and vegetables.
ResponderEliminarAs we all know, the meat and fish and other foods bring us a few nutrients and vitamins that vegetables and fruits have not. So, I usually do exercise and I need a diet which provide me everything you need to have energy and perform in daily workouts.To sump up , is a good composition good structure , I don´t see any mistakes ! EMILIO
This topic seems very interesting because I stopped eating meat two years ago. I ate fish, so I wasn't completely vegetarian but I didn't eat meat and maybe this was the reason that sometimes I felt dizzy and weak. Now, I eat even a small amount of meat because I believe that our body needs to feed of all kinds of food especially when you are growing. By the way, good composition!
ResponderEliminarI agree with Lorena,I think that we need to eat all : meat, fish, vegetables...it's very important to grow healthy. In my opinion, this composition is very well structured and you have used easy vocabulary.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
I agree with the composition: we must eat all kind of food because if we don't do it, we'll have a lack of several proteins and vitamins.Moreover, like Lorena , My mother and I used to think that we could stick to a vegetarian diet and we starting by buying soybean milk, vegetarian hamburgers, algae... but we realised that we could life without meat and we got back to our normal diet.
ResponderEliminarFinally , I would like to say that you have written thinck* and it is 'think'.
Kisses to everybody!
Sorry , I meant to say ...couldn't*
ResponderEliminarThe composition is very good, but there is a small mistake: "undestand"->"understand" . I think that the people have to eat of all food, because if we don`t eat meat, milk... we will have diseases as anemia, deficiency of calcium, gout... Furthermore, the vegetarians have to eat a lot of chemical pills. By: Paqui.
ResponderEliminaryou have done a good work! the composition is very well and I agree with your opinion. we have to eat a diversity food and this food should be fresh and health. If you do it, you will be able to sure about your health and you will have a good diet. In addition, you can prevent diseases.
ResponderEliminarAlejandra Ávila
the composition of the text is perfect and have good estructure
ResponderEliminarI have liked very much the redaction. Angel has reason, it is necessary to eat of everything.
ResponderEliminarMany people do not know the problems that exist not having eaten well.