Vegetarianism is an ideology that says that eating food (meat etc) derived from an animal is kill animals.People who follow this ideology are vegetarians who eat only vegetables.
On the one hand, vegetarians are right because sometimes we overeat meat until the point of extinguishingsome animals. The burgers etc also can kill us if we eat too much.
On the other hand, doctors recommend that we eat meat so we can have proteins, carbohydrates etc.
In conclusion, I think that many vegetarians are exceeded, because I like more a burger king burger that one oftofu.
I am agree with Jesus because , if you are a vegetarian you need eat meat for you be complete phisic and mental. Because the meat is a food good for the organism and necessary
ResponderEliminarYour wording is a bit short. My opinion about this is that a person has to eat everything without abusing it's not healthy. And I share your idea of burger king ;).
ResponderEliminarThe comment above is mine: Carolina Sanchez.
ResponderEliminarYour composition is very, very short. It seems you were wishing to finish. Instead of putting "etc." you could have written more things. Remember to separate words and the next time you can add more arguments for and against.
ResponderEliminarThe composition of Jesus, I think taht is very very short, you should write more!!
ResponderEliminarBy: Adrian ;D!
I think that your composition is very short; you should have done it longer. This composition is well structured and the vocabularu is easy but paragraphs are very short.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
Firsly, the composition is very very very very very short, you should do it more longer. The compostion isn`t elaborated. By: Paqui
ResponderEliminarJesus! your composition is very short and I only can say that I disagree with you because it is widely known that a burger king's burger is more delicious than one tofu's burger, however, we have to take control of ourselves and know that it isn't healthy.
ResponderEliminaryour composition is very short, your should write more. You haven't put more connectors and this composition isn't well structured.
ResponderEliminar¡¡ALEJANDRO SANCHEZ GRACIA!!
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your composition is very, very short! you have to do a larger composition and it should be like PAU so you can pratise the exam. In addition, you should read the last pages of the student book about how do very good your composition. But I agree with you, I like the Buerger King and M Donals too.
ResponderEliminarAlejandra Ávila
I have to say as my classmates have said before that this composition is very very short. You must do some paragraphs and longer of course.
ResponderEliminarI agree with your opinion and I think people eat all they like but they also have to take care with fast food.
the composition of the text is perfect and have good estructure
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