domingo, 15 de enero de 2012

María's composition ( historiacal event)

The last Romanov
During Russian Revolution , the Zar (king ) Nicolas II abdicated in 1917. Next year , Nicolas II , his wife and his 5 children ( Tatiana , Olga , María , Anastasia and Alexander ) were placed under house arrest since April until July. On 17th of July , Nicolás , his family and 4 servants were told that they were to be photographed in the cellar to prove russian people that they were still alive. But , they were actually   shot by Bolshevik authorities and Bolshevik members threw on Romanov's family a sulfuric acid to descompose their bodies quicker.

The place where Bolsheviks hid the bodies was secret , that's because there were a lot of rumors about some Romanov was still alive, however in 1991 the police found that place with bones' family and a scientist told that Anastasia and Alexander 's bones weren't present. Many people had the will that the younger children could escape the killings and many young ladies claimed that they were the real Anastasia to earn money , but it wasn't true.

Finally, in 2007, 60 metres further of the last site , police found again bones of two people and with several DNA testing , scientists could prove that they belonged to Anastasia and Alexander 's  bones. No Romanov member could survive to the 17 th of July in 1918 ' s murder . What a pity!


13 comentarios:

  1. Your composition is perfect: you have separate the paragraps, you have used connectors and the composition is interesting.

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  2. Maria I love this history and you know it!
    I knew that you would do the composition about Romanov and also I knew that your composition would be perfect!For my there isn't errors!

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    Respuestas
    1. I am PAULA GUIRAO!
      Never I remenber to write my name :D

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  3. Maria your composition is very good, is well separate and the history is very interesting... i like it

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  4. PD: soi JESUS VERA jejejeje

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  5. Your composition is perfect and the topic is good.
    by: Paqui ;D

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  6. Your compositions is very good and very well estructurate and the topic so is very good.

    By: Adrian :D'

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  7. Im Rafa Bernabe, I think that this topic is a very interesant, because the history of other country always its.
    So Maria has a good level of english and she hasn't mistake¡¡
    In It's composition she use conectors in adicction she doesn't theirs.
    OK ¡¡

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  8. Im Rafa Bernabe, I think that this topic is a very interesant, because the history of other country always its.
    So Maria has a good level of english and she hasn't mistake¡¡
    In It's composition she use conectors in adicction she doesn't abuse theirs.
    OK ¡¡
    PD: Your forgetting the first coment, pleased.

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  9. you are very good at history! however your history's topic is very interesting and awful, you have chosen it really good. I like how you express; your composition is good organized and it has a special vocabulary for the topic. Perfect!, you have done very good work! congratulations!

    Alejandra Ávila

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  10. I think that your composition is very interesting and it is very well organized.You have used much vocabulary and you have done paragraphs.Good job !

    Virginia Belmonte.

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  11. Your composition is very good, your ideas are well structured and also have put many connectors

    ALEJANDRO SÁNCHEZ GRACIA

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