United States Declaration of Independence
The Declaration of Independence was a statement adopted by the Continental Congress on July 4, 1776, which announced that the thirteen American colonies then at war with Great Britain regarded themselves as independent states, and no longer a part of the British Empire. John Adams put forth a resolution earlier in the year which made a formal declaration inevitable. A committee was assembled to draft the formal declaration, which was to be ready when congress voted on independence. Adams persuaded the committee to select Thomas Jefferson to compose the original draft of the document, which congress would edit to produce the final version. The Declaration was ultimately a formal explanation of why Congress had voted on July 2 to declare independence from Great Britain, more than a year after the outbreak of the American Revolutionary War. The birthday of the United States of America, the Independence Day, is celebrated on July 4, the day the wording of the Declaration was approved by Congress a statement which was signed by all components of the room U.S. is independent !!
Your composition is good and you have used different vocabulary but I think that you should have done longer the composition and you should have done paragraphs too.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
I think that the composition is good, is a interesting topic and also, the writing is good. Furthermore, you have to put paragraphs where you put : the introduction (is there), the body and the conclusion. Finally, you have to try to do it more longer.
ResponderEliminarby Paqui :D
You can find exactly the same words in the wikipedia: what a coincidence!
ResponderEliminarThis composition is very well written although as have said Paqui and Virginia you have to separate the paragraphs.
ResponderEliminarHello Javi!
ResponderEliminarYour composition is very good because it is very interesting,it is very good written but if you has coped this of the wikipedia...it is very bad!!
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