All happened in halloween.My friends and me were in Carol's house because this night we went to sleep there.
we decorated all very good with cobweb, terrifying pumpkins and skulls.
Andre,Maria,Claudia Mazon and me thought in to play a joke Camelia,Claudia Alcaina,Carol and Marta, but suddenly the lights went out and we only listened strangers sounds and knock. We had got fear and we shouted. Maria found a lantern and ours boyfriends appeared. It was a joke!
We were angry, although they only did a thing that Andrea,Maria,Claudia M. and me wanted to do
It's funny but the narration is very short.
ResponderEliminarBy the way, I sent my narration yesterday.Where is it?
It's a good narration and it is good estructurate but it is very short, you should write it longer.
ResponderEliminarI think that your narration is very short. You should write the text more larg. The history is good.
ResponderEliminarBy: Paqui
I agree with the comment of Frnciscaa( Paqui) is very short
ResponderEliminarADRIAN PLAZA ;D
The story is very funny and very well structured but as my classmates say , you should have written it more extensive and take advantage of it.
ResponderEliminarHAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYBODY !
The story is very well structured but is very short. I think that you should write something more about your narration.
ResponderEliminarALEJANDRO SANCHEZ GRACIA
Your composition is amusing and funny but I think that your composition should be longer. In addition, I believe that you should have used more vocabulary.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
This composition is very short,it must be longer.The story is interesting but when you have read every paragraph is as if it was incomplete above all the last paragraph.
ResponderEliminarI agree with Merche this composition is very short..
ResponderEliminarMarco
paula the wording is well but but I see that lacks a bit more of conclusion ... but I have liked the topic
ResponderEliminarGood history paulaa!! This one well structured but it is short
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