If you were a foreign person…Would you like to feel marginalized?
Many people are against of discrimination. Foreign people help us develop our country with their job and knowledge.
Moreover, they transmit us their customs and traditions and so, it does our country more attractive for tourist. Living with foreign people help us be more tolerant and better persons.
However, there are many people that are in favour of discrimination. They think that foreign people are dangerous and they are persons who steal and kill other persons. Foreign people take us job because they work cheaper and it’s more economic for businessman. In addition, they try to impose their customs and take our traditions.
Finally, I want to say that I am against of discrimination. When we born, we have same rights and for this reason, we can live anywhere. All people are equal.
I agree with you,Virginia. I am against of discriminatio because all people are equal and I wouldn´t like feel marginalized.
ResponderEliminarBut I think that the composition isn't very good estructured.The introduction should be more wide,it should have one paragraph with ideas against and other with ideas for and finally a conclusion more wide too.
PAULA GUIRAO GRAU
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ResponderEliminar:D,paula guirao
I agree with Virginia by the text that she has writen but I also think in agree and I don´t agree, for example in the tradition , custumes , and food... I am agree , but I don´t agree that in the most news this person have killied a other people but the Spanis also are.
ResponderEliminarSo, this text that Virginia has writen is very good , an conectors and a vocabulary easy for understand.
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by, ADRIAN PLAZA
I agree with you because I also think as you about this topic.
ResponderEliminarYour composition is good but in my opinion you should done the introduccion a bit longer introducing some question... and finally you have repeated five times the word:FOREIGN, so you could use a synonym such as: people who don't live in Spain...
I agree with Virginia , all people are equal ;D that a good phrase. This compositio is awosomen for undestund jeje
ResponderEliminarMarco Saz
I agree with you. I can't understand how people can be in favour of discrimination. We are all equal and we have the same rights.
ResponderEliminar"All men are created equal" was used in the Declaration of Independence of the United States of America. Here you have a link with the document.
ResponderEliminarCan you find the sentence in the document?
http://www.archives.gov/exhibits/charters/declaration_transcript.html
I agree with Virginia all people think as you about this topic. Your composicion has writen is very good because has conectors and a vocabulary easy.
ResponderEliminarALEJANDRO SANCHEZ
I agree with you because I also think as you about this topic. We are all equal and we have the same rights.I don´t agree,custumes , and food.
ResponderEliminarSo , this text that Virginia has writen is very good , an conectors and a vocabulary easy for understand.
EMILIO TORRES
Virginia has developed its text very well, follows all the guidelines for proper development.
ResponderEliminarMy opinion is the same as that of Virginia.
Carolina Sanchez Bullejos
I agree with you. I'm foreign but i'm in Spain since 2000/2001 and i don't like the discrimination because there are bad foreign but not all the foreign are bad person. I'm here for studing and have a better future.
ResponderEliminarThe text have a good estructure. Good work, Virginia!
Alejandra Avila
Heyy!! I agree with you and I think that your composition is very good structured and that your composition have a good arguments.
ResponderEliminarI absotely agree with Virginia's thought.I'm against of discrimination because we all are people with the same rights and the World belongs to everybody. Furhtermore , it's better that a town is cosmopolitan because in this way, we will able to see the differents traditions , cultures , customs...
ResponderEliminarBriefly speaking,We mustn't feel strange when there's foreign people at class, at work or whatever because each person has their own ways of living. As Lady Gaga says : I was born in this way xD