We believe that foreigners are people who come here to do bad things like killing, abuse, assault .... But not, if you think about it, they come here for work to feed their families because their countries have no work. that they come here because itbenefits us all work for the country while consuming causing revenue for the country.We should rely more on foreign and eliminate the barriers of hatred and rejection thatlead us away from them. We always think badly about people and how we arecriticized by nature, but should change. In conclusion, I say I have friends abroad andare normal people.
ey guy where is the title ?
ResponderEliminarMarco Saz
The composition has to be distributed in paragraphs.
ResponderEliminarIn the first paragraph: the introduction.
In the second paragraph: ideas for, against or both.
And finally, in the last paragraph: the conclusion and your opinion.
Text not clear. Your text dosn't have paragraphs and dosn't have a title so it is not appropriate.
ResponderEliminarBut it is true that you post.
Carolina Sanchez Bullejos.
I understand your ideas but your composition doesn't have any paragraphs you have to write a introduction, the arguments and finally a conclusion with your opinion.
ResponderEliminarIn other words: your text isn't clear and you mustn't use the translator because there are some words meaningless.
an* introduction
ResponderEliminarI think that your composition aren't good estructurated because you haven't done a distiction of paragraphs. As in the first paragraph you have to put the introduction and you have to speak of the advantages and of the desavantages, in the second paragraph you have to put the advantages , in the third paragraph you have to put the disavantages and in the last paragraph you have to put the conclusion and your opinion. The opinion alone appears at the last paragraph.
ResponderEliminarI agree wiht you but I think that you should have done paragraphs and you should have done an introduction and a conclusion.
ResponderEliminarVirgina Belmonte.
Roman , aren't you ashamed of uploading this terrible composition? Please , you must
ResponderEliminarestructurated it much better and explain things more especifically.
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the composition is good organized, but i disagree with your opinion because there are foreigners who haven´t work and steal.
ResponderEliminarJESUS VERA
The composition is not bad, but you have to separate in paragraphs, write an introduction and conclusion, etc.
ResponderEliminarDespite, I agree with you, foreigners are not criminals
Angel Valero
I think the organization of the composition is not good at all and you have to improve your conclusions too.
ResponderEliminarAsensio Argiler Grau
i can understand the introduction
ResponderEliminarMarco