Many people say that reality shows should be banned because they can be very dangerous, then, does it interest to risk the life for to be a millionaire?. However, there are also advantages of this. We must look at both sides of the question.
One advantage is that reality shows are entertaining for many persons, consequently, they have a lot of television audience. Moreover, although there is a economic crisis, reality shows have established a kingdom that seems not to finish. In addition, in reality shows the participants earn a lot of money.
On the other hand, reality shows are dangerous, you risk your life for money and in many cases, people have died. Furthermore, there are people that think that reality shoes are a rubbisk programming and consequently, they shouldn’t issue. In addition, in reality shows often the competitor puts in ridiculously.
On balance, I think that the disadvantages overcome to the advantages because the competitors shouldn’t risk the life for to earn or not to earn money. And consequently, I think that reality shows should be banned.
Very good Paqui!! :D
ResponderEliminarYour composition is perfectly estructured!
Also it is very good because you has used connectors and the grammar is good.
On the other hand, I agree with you because the reality shows are always dangerous or stupids.
PAULA GUIRAO GRAU
This composition is good estructured but there are some mistakes such as *rubbisk--> RUBBISH, after preposition verb with -ing and there are also some sentences that have not sense, *reality SHOES--> reality shows.
ResponderEliminarI think that if reality shows exist is for some reason,so I don't think that reality shows should be banned.
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Read the "Reality television" article on the blog, it is very interesting for this topic.
ResponderEliminarYour writing is well structured but I think you have taken to an extreme too strong the subject of death to make realitis for if they would be prohibited as dangerous and could not be broadcast or performed.
ResponderEliminarCarolina Sanchez Bullejos
I agree with your opinion, Paqui! I also think that reality shows should be banned. I believe that your composition is well structured because it has a introduction, a paragraph with advantages and other with disadvantages and finally, it has a conclusion with your opinion. Good work !
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
I hate reality shows but I think that shouldn't be banned. If I don't like reality shows, I don't see them. Reality shows have many followers and usually don't hurt anyone and just want to entertain.
ResponderEliminarI think the reality shows must be barred , paqui the composition is so good , but you will be more strong on critic
ResponderEliminarMarco