Abolish bullfighting is a current affair which is quite disputed by everybody. What's more, in 'Cataluña' there are much controversy. But,Why should we abolish it?
An argument in favour could be that the bull wouldn't suffer because bullfighting is a show very violent. Another argument: the bullfighter wouldn't be at death's door. It's very hard to see a scene where the bull dies.
In addition,there are also arguments for not abolish it such as: this is a tradition of lifelong and there are many people who like it. Many jobs may be lost,so workers who work in it have to find another job for earnig money.
Finally, I think that bullfighting don't have to be abolished because it's a business although the bull don't deserve it. I've known it all my life. Furthermore, for older people it's an entertainment because they watch it on tv.
I don't agree with Merche because it's not necesary to kill an animal to enternain old people. In my opinion Merche has failed in line 10, becaus maybe it's not separated and she write this separated. I think that the rest of the composition is so good.
ResponderEliminarAngel Valero
Firstly I'd like to say I'm disagree with Merche because bullfighting is a terrible show. I can't believe that people can enjoy watching how another people kill an animal ( bull , dog , pig or whatever ) and they defend this practice only saying that it's a Spanish tradition... To me , it's a method very primitive and it only demonstrates how retarded are Spanish people's mind.
ResponderEliminarBriefly speaking , for things like this I'm ashamed of being Spanish and I am able to understand why French people criticize us.
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María Martínez Nortes ( Praestgaard)
I’m agree with Merche with her opinion of that the bullfighting are a shows very violent, but I don’t agree with the idea of that there isn’t that to abolish these inhumane shows , because neither animal must to suffer through the fault of us , and more if it is to entertain to the people, I don’t agree anything . I believe that if little by little the people is aroused, we could to finish with the animal suffering, and a step for it is to abolish the bullfighting. Cataluña has been declared himself antibullfighting and I am very happy by this. I hope that the people arouse and to blat out this “practice” that for me is a horrific thing.
ResponderEliminarWith regar to the composition, I think that is good, that merche has ordered the ideas in the correct paragraphs and that is very good organized.
-"very violent show", "lifelong tradition" (adjective BEFORE noun).
ResponderEliminar-"bullfighting doesn't have to...", "the bull doesn't deserve" (3rd person sg)
-"I agree/I disagree/I don't agree" (NOT "I'm disagree")
Well done! This discussion is very interesting. Is there anyone in favour of bullfighting?
Yes! I'm in favour of bullfighting because since I was very young I've seen it with my granfather so I respect it because of the dangerous it has. I know that is very hard for some people to see how a person kills an animal, but I'd like to make a reflexion for everyone. If all the people that waste his energy trying to make a reality the total abolishment of de bullfighting spendt that energy trying to help poor people, won't we have a better country and world? That's my opinion.
ResponderEliminarAsensio Argiler Grau
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ResponderEliminarI disagree with your opinion because I think that bullfighting is a unnecessary entertainment and it is very violent for the bulls.
ResponderEliminarI believe that your composition is very well organized. You have done a paragraph with advantages and other with disadvantages. In addition, you has done a question in the introduction for call reader's attention.
In my opinion, your composition is perfect !
Virginia Belmonte.
I think that the composition is good estructured,because it has got a introduction,one paragraph with ideas for,other with ideas against and finally with her opinion.Put I don't agree with she because bullfighting is very violent,the bull doesn't deserve this and bullfighting is a shame!
ResponderEliminarPAULA GUIRAO GRAU
I disagree with Merche's opinion, although the bulls only are animals , It isn't just. Killing for entertainment is terrible. It's incredible that this thing happen on 21st century.
ResponderEliminarAlejandra Ávila López
Merche your text is very well organized, the structure is the correct. I do not find any mistake. But I do not share your opinion because for my bullfighting it is an activity that should disappear. The people do not have to sacrifice fun watching a bull. The bullfighting should disappear.
ResponderEliminarI disagree with you. There are many ways to entertain and bullfighting is unnecessary.
ResponderEliminarI agree with Merche. Yes, it's true that bulls don't deserve that destiny, but bullfighting is a tradition, and Spain is known for flamenco and for bulls. And there is another reason to agree with her and is that I like to see the bullfightings.
ResponderEliminarI like the composition because Merche has writen with conectors and her opinion is very interesting
ResponderEliminarADRIAN PLAZA
I disagree with Merche because it's not necesary to kill an animal to enternain old people
ResponderEliminarI believe that your composition is very well organized with conectors
I like this composicion
ALEJANDRO SÁNCHEZ
I agree with Merche. Yes, it's true that bulls don't deserve that destiny, but bullfighting is a tradition,with her opinion of that the bullfighting are a shows very violent, but I don’t agree with the idea of that there isn’t that to abolish these inhumane shows , because neither animal must to suffer through the fault of us ,
ResponderEliminarthe composition is good estructured,because it has got a introduction ,I believe that your composition is very well organized with conectors
EMILIO TORRES
I agree with bullfihgting, because i like it, and is Spanish tradition. Merche your composition is very good
ResponderEliminarI agree with bullfihgting, because i like it, and is Spanish tradition. Merche your composition is very good.
ResponderEliminarJESUS VERA
me parece una fiesta bastante violenta
ResponderEliminarpor la muerte del toro,pero es una costumbre
mui tipica de españa,podrian hacerse las corridas
de toros pero sin matar al toro al final de cada corrid....RUBENGO =)
I think the structure is easy to understand and perfect. I understand very well. congrats
ResponderEliminarthis is a good composition , I understand all compositio.
ResponderEliminarI don't like the bullfihgting because I don't like to see kill an animal , but , is a Spanish tradition, I think they should do a bullfihgting but don't kiil the bull how say ruben ;D
-Marco Saz