Our Spanish calendar has 9 nationalistic parties for all the communities as for example the New Year's Day, the Mother's Day … that are celebrated in the whole Spain. They are days in which many things are remembered.
They are parties that great people celebrate since they are the days in which they can to assemble and do a party all the members of a family. In these days the students do not go to the college for what they wait these days with many people for desire. Some workers are not going to work either. It is a great advantage that they have these days for these persons.
In my opinion these days come very well a year, since there are not great the national holidays parties that we have.
I agree with your opinion, Claudia ! But I don´t understand very well some syntactic structures.
ResponderEliminarVirginia Belmonte.
The content of Claudia's composition is good but I think that it ins't very well structured. For example I don't understand very well the second paragraph and she doesn't say in particular if nationalistic parties are good for Spain or not.
ResponderEliminarI also think so. People would come in handy a few days of relaxation for many days straight working and deserve a break.In my opinion the text is very good.Congratulations Claudia
ResponderEliminarHellow ¡ I’m agree with your opinion but I think that the ideas aren’t organize in the correct paragraphs because in the first paragraph you have inserted the topic but also you ough to say that there are advantages and disadvantages. In the second paragraph have to write the advantages, and this is good in your writing. There isn’t a third paragraph where to write the disadvantages. In the finally paragraph you have to summarize the arguments and you have to give you opinion and you have given the opinion alone. In definitive, the topic is good, but I think that the writing could be best improvening the structure and the organization of the ideas.
ResponderEliminarI think the same. In the nationalistic parties, we have the opportunity to be with our family and we can relax.
ResponderEliminarHello friend Claudia! your writing is very good because it tells the whole truth. You have every reason to expect students to lose national holidays but otherwise class to meet with the family. I really enjoyed your writing.
ResponderEliminarI agree with you,Claudia, the national parties is the best of the years and you can do manything with your friend and family.
ResponderEliminarBut I don't understand something. For example, I think that if you refer to the day, you have to write It, not They and the estructure of the text. Althoungh It's very good. Bye!
Alejandra Avila.
Claudia the ideas are goods but i feel that something missing because you say that these parties are goods but you don´t say the structure is desorder. But i like it bye.
ResponderEliminarI agree with your opinion, claudia.Los national holidays are good to relax and spend with the family.But you have to organize it better.
ResponderEliminarJESUS VERA
I agree with you too claudia, if we don't have national holidays , we losted the head ,you composition is so good , one kiss.
ResponderEliminarMarco Saz
I think that claudia has done this composition so well, buy she has failed including words like ¨in which¨ (line 3). So I think that it isn't perfect buy it's well done.
ResponderEliminarAngel Valero
I agree with you in the text, but I thought the subject uninteresting and boring, but congrats
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